Thread:FidoFuz/@comment-6354916-20130214101747/@comment-4576875-20130214105446

Here are some of the things you changed:

from: "Accelerators can come individually or inside boxes or kits"

to: "Accelerators can come individually or inside boxes or kit"

kits should be plural but you changed it to singular

from: "Get five Cerulean Cores for the price of four"

to: "Get five Cerulean Cores for the price of four during a period of time"

as well as being incorrect, the grammar is poor "during a period of time"?

from: "They mostly give free items however some require you to complete a certain task."

to: "They mostly give free items but however some require you to complete a certain task."

"but however" is poor grammar. I'm not saying the grammar was correct here in the first place but your change made it worse not better. Perhaps it should have been "items, however" or even possibly "items, but, however".

I do not claim to be an expert on grammar. I am not, but I know enough to see when article is changed to be less gramatically correct.

As a side issue for anyone else reading this. Alysdexia is a user who has a good knowledge of grammar and would be able to assist you better than I could. However, preferring to dissect this response to you for errors rather than try to address your issue would be counter-productive.

If my advice to you is not correct, however, then I would welcome being corrected.